Some people believe that tourists should accept social and environmental responsibility while others believe that tourists should not accept any responsibility at all. what is your opinion?
The issue of the tourism industry has grown in importance over the past few decades. According to, some people are of the view that tourists should abide by their responsibilities associated with societies and the environment, while, others are not. I completely agree with the opinion of respect to environmental and social rules and explain why in this essay.
Nowadays, a number of factors threaten environment which leads to catastrophic phenomena like famine, drought and habitat loss. Hence, all humans, even tourists, are in charge to preserve the environment from any hazards. Undoubtedly, if passengers from other countries do not pay attention to conserving nature, it is more possible that the unspoilt sights are exposed to extinction. For example, the coral reefs in India are going to destroy because tourists by taking away this structure cause destroy this ecosystem.
Furthermore, it is of paramount matter that foreign traveler appreciate the cultural values of a host country. Admittedly, there are many laws in each country known as convention and all people have adhered to them. As a result, chaos would be avoided and offenders would be punished. Therefore, it is an obligation for tourists to obey these rules due to establishing peace of mind.
Although, it may correct to say that perhaps some tourists should neglect their social norms in a host country, in deeper inspection it is necessary for them to maintain the fabric of host societies.
Overall, it can be said that it would be displayed humanity if tourists could respect the all right of a host community in terms of environment and the codes of conduct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... environment and the codes of conduct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15298507463 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88062359821 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1596587267 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218384967257 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628170105491 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816748115547 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109778906496 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741292043921 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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