Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most of the people are opting for a complete vegetarian diet, which means not eating flesh of any kind. Because they assert it to be beneficial for their health as well as for the entire world. In my opinion, I believe that being a vegetarian is not only prevents the individual from harmful illnesses related to the flesh but also save other people by alleviating the spread of communicable diseases.
Being a vegan has lots of health benefits. For one, a person will stay fit and healthy as the vegetarian food contains less fats compared to the non-vegetarian food. These saturated fats are harmful to the body as their regular consumption makes a person obese. According to the Food and Health journal of 2019, for instance, people living in the coastal areas have high risks of obesity and diabetes as they are prone to eat flesh on a daily basis. Secondly, plant-based food is valuable for the body as it get digest easily. Therefore, a vegetarian diet is a better option for the fitness and health of the body.
Furthermore, a vegetarian diet can protect the whole world from food-borne diseases associated with flesh. In other words, most of the ailments are related to uncooked meat, thereby contagious in nature. They rapidly spread from one person to another in no time, and cause severe health problems. Because the flesh sometimes contains worms and bacterias, which have devastating effects on the body. Take, pork of pigs, for example, generally it has cysts of roundworms and flatworms, which get multiplied in the digestive tract of the human body. These unwanted worms can cause headaches, diarrhea, and pass to another individual through cyst formation. Hence, the option of choosing a vegan diet has paramount importance for the world.
In conclusion, the pros of switching to a vegan diet for individual health and its global benefits have been discussed. I personally advocate the viewpoint as it can improve the fitness and keep the world away from dangerous diseases related to the flesh.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun fats is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...healthy as the vegetarian food contains less fats compared to the non-vegetarian foo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6825239232 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525073746313 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9554644808 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189866147266 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606700040145 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460915537157 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120500463229 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469927101471 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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