Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is the responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Climate change has become an inevitable issue around the world with a reckless increase in pollution. Certain demographics hold the statement that everyone should take a stand for this to resolve it while others refer governments to take responsibility for environmental protection. As far as I see, it is difficult to eliminate the global warming without the collective efforts of both sides.
First and foremost, governments can have comprehensive plans and budgets to tackle the evil of global warming. They can utilize the expertise of scientists and climate researchers to find possible ways to slow down the process of severe weather change in different countries mostly in European and Asia where seasons are getting longer and shorter dramatically due to increasing industrial waste and pollution. Therefore, they can enforce laws to protect the environment from drastic exploitation and take some initiatives to restore the damaged environment. A rather illustrative example is Billion trees Project in which Pakistani Government has a plan to plant 1 Billion trees countywide.
Conversely, seven billion people are contributing to global warming in different ways like carbon emission and deforestation which can be reduced to a substantial level. People can start to use environmental-friendly products such as electric cars and metal furniture instead of wooden ones. On a further note, people can also boycott the companies that are damaging the green environment. These businesses will stop their anti-green practices under the pressure of public reaction. As a result, global warming can be eliminated by the effort of individuals to a considerable level.
I am of the opinion that there are many environmental laws introduced by governments but not taken seriously by residents. It can bring tremendous improvement in global warming if people obey all the laws strictly to protect the environment.
The conclusion to be drawn is that governments have more powerful tools and resources to address climate change; however, people can also make it better with their little effort as avoiding the cause of global warming like pollution and deforestation can matter a lot to ameliorate the natural environment of the earth.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a Billion'.
Suggestion: A Billion
...nment. A rather illustrative example is Billion trees Project in which Pakistani Govern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47550432277 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19357251326 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587896253602 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9720203875 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174641812604 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597948557161 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424307233971 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100130762931 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296367775596 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a Billion'.
Suggestion: A Billion
...nment. A rather illustrative example is Billion trees Project in which Pakistani Govern...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47550432277 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19357251326 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587896253602 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9720203875 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174641812604 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597948557161 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424307233971 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100130762931 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296367775596 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.