Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertisements have become part of our lives in this digital era, whatever we see now in a screen or a in a phone has an advertisement on it. Some people claim that advertisements are informative and allows to know about new things that comes to the market, While some people thinks that the advertisements are forcefully selling products that we never use. This essay will discuss on how advertisements sell unwanted products more often than we think rather than being informative.
Advertisements have made way for new products with its innovative presentation. The innovative commercials helps us informed about new type of things that are available in the market. For example, There is a light bulb commercial which claims it can kill germs in the house and keep the house much safer from pollutants and germs. On another instance we could see that the food made out of olive oil is healthier than the food that are cooked using sunflower oil. In conclusion , The advertisements make awareness to the customer about the life style changes they can make by buying a correct product.
However on the other hand , the reality of current advertising trend is not always helping the customer. The focus is more on selling the products rather than giving precise information about the product. For example, The advertisements on flexible tables is an opt one. Because most people will already have a study table or work desk in their home. The ad forces us to buy the product as everyone around have it. It emphasis on the peer pressure and forcing us to buy it. Another classic example is Mutual funds, The ads claims that investing in mutual funds is quite simple and anyone can do it. But in reality one must have the basic knowledge of the mutual funds before making an invetment. It is evident that more advertisements are misdirected than giving factual information and pressuring people into buying things that are not needed for them.
The advertisements are means through which a new products are being sold nowadays. This essay discussed on how some advertisements are informative and helps us to make healthier life style. In addition this essay also discussed how the advertisements keeps the customers misinformed and forcefully sell products to customers. To summarize the advertisements are not reliable and customers should buy products based on their needs rather than falling prey for the advertisements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'knowing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: knowing
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Message: You should probably use 'help'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05472636816 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92052776116 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504975124378 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3077536274 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7619047619 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306455440656 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965595159907 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582911818722 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199223253925 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258622158753 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.