Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher. Others say that student attitudes also do matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher. Others say that student attitudes also do matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the aim to achieve the heights of success in the career ladder, one has to be attentive for educational knowledge. While some people perceive that educational success is dependent on a knowledgeable trainer, others are in consummate discord with it and argue that attitude of pupils is principle catalyst for this. I wholeheartedly concur with latter views because only focused students have capability to follow what their teacher is trying to convey.
Firstly, to my perception, it is the attitudes of the students that enable them to achieve the good educational grades. If a students is passionate about his studies, he would definitely do best in his studies and gain success. It can be illustrated by the less financial stable students, doing self studies for engineering and medical entrance examinations most of the time and coming first in the district even without the help of any teacher. On the contrary, there are many instances where students have access to best educators even though they fail to get same grades as focused students. Besides, to achieve success in the field of education, all that students need to consider is their personal interest, self control and maximum time devoted to studies. Therefore, even best trainers cannot help students without these qualities if they want to gain good educational grades.
On the other hand, there has been a growing body of opinion considering a great teacher to be responsible for the educational success of students. Mentors are mandatory not even for educational success, but in any other field where one wants to taste success under proper guidance and supervision. In this context, a thorough research has been conducted by 'Harvard University' UK in 2016 using online survey with sample size of 1000 Canadian students and found that they did best in their education only because of their knowledgeable instructor. Also, they admitted that they see their instructor as their source of motivation, which is must in the long run process. Hence, what a teacher can do for his students in short period of time using his expertise and immense knowledge makes him contributing factor behind educational success.
As shown above, although the teacher's guidance and support plays prominent role in career success of pupils, I firmly opine that their attitudes are nonpareil factors behind their success . With that conviction, I would hand over the trophy of being catalyst of educational success to students' attitudes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a student; students
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... stable students, doing self studies for engineering and medical entrance examina...
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Suggestion: to the best
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Suggestion: even the best
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Suggestion: thorough research
...dance and supervision. In this context, a thorough research has been conducted by Harvard Universit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, while, as to, in short, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21247113164 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75047753581 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526558891455 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7515811743 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.789473684 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7894736842 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416930697783 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1494134028 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138868999986 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319715216458 0.151304729494 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.304548614365 0.056905535591 535% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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