Some people say that it is important for everyone to do something creative in their free time. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While utilizing spare time to do creative things is important for some people but for others it is unimportant. Learning to spend time on activities such as photography, cooking, reading or creative writing can be beneficial but resting the mind is more important for some people. This essay will discuss on both the views and provide an opinion of the issue.
Firstly, creative activity may boost the confidence level in most people. Creative confidence has a positive impact on an individual’s productivity. For example, playing a guitar is my method to unwind and recharge my energy levels after red days as a trader trading in foreign exchange market. The satisfaction of playing a song on my instrument brings positive energy for the next day. Hence, some people support this view.
Conversely, getting lost in mundane routines and extended hours at work is the new norm in a competitive corporate world. Most people resort to binge watching series on Netflix. Leading Clinical psychologist also confirm that watching mindless TV releases dopamine chemical in the body giving them a high. This internal reward of pleasure for instance is leading cause for most not to pursue creative tasks.
In conclusion, making use of free time is of importance for many people but trivial for some. In my opinion, doing creative things is required to energise your spirit but doing mindless things periodically may also be valuable. If early education creates interest for creativity, children may grow up with hobbies that can be fulfilling to kill boredom in the future. In today’s times hobbies and mindless TV viewing can be vital to relief the stresses of everyday struggle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15693430657 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76311118478 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8267068121 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325705713184 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10102196708 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093154372789 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191062245971 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112877632956 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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