Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Some would argue that, ones behavior and attitude as well as cultural heritage could be depicted from their way or mode of dressing and I disagree with that school of thought because of diversity in our way of dressing and complexity of human nature.
Firstly, we are in the age of population explosion and freedom of way of living. Most countries have varieties of inhabitants who comes from different ethnic, religious and career background. It will be erroneous to judge a persons ethnicity from what they put on. Many people tend to wear formal dresses because of the nature of their jobs and so it is not easy to decide where they come from just by facial appearance. For example, many immigrants from different countries and different cultures in Canada now dress as a matter of survival due to the coldness of the place and not where they come from because their personal traditional clothing will not keep them warm as it is not fit for such weather.
Secondly, it is difficult to predict human nature and behavioral instincts because we are dynamic by default. Several factors affect human attitudes and clothing is definitely not one of them. Human beings are social animals, and need that close interaction or mingling to adequately judge or say who they are in relation to character. For example, a person who is an introvert who just joined an establishment may be<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> seen as being '</span>snobbish'<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> not knowing it is his or her nature. Human beings are also good at pretending irrespective of the cloth they put on. I believe we need </span>to be close<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> to a person and study him or her over a </span>time<span style="font-size: 1.1em;"> before judging</span><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">.</span><div>
In conclusion, though some people opine that a persons ethnic group or cultural background can be inferred from the attire they adorn and I am in total disagreement with this statement due to the complex nature of human beings and diversification of population in any given nation.</div>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Some would argue that, ones behavior and attitude as well as cultur...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ground. It will be erroneous to judge a persons ethnicity from what they put on. Many p...
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Line 6, column 46, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...nclusion, though some people opine that a persons ethnic group or cultural background can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33823529412 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88760228896 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.169032236 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.25 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124757497158 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476669970808 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442165957867 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994535270458 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048180555268 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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