Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Clothes is an inevitable part of human life which represents a lot about a person. While many people believe that a person’s choice of clothes reveal entirely about that person’s culture and character, some people do not concede with this idea. I agree with the statement that choice of clothes reveals a lot about one’s personality.
Firstly, human beings give a lot of time in their clothing and also it is a basic need of human being. So when they are wearing something, it is very well thought of. Secondly, people do not buy any fabric they dislike or they think they are unable to carry. Moreover, we have varieties of option in cases of clothing, be it design, or shape and as we see everything eventually sells out. This proves that people’s choice are different
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At time people coming from same cultural cohort tend to buy similar things. For example, people from South Asia have inclinations towards saree, which people from other zones does not have. This represents cultural similarities. Again some people like to wear bold colors while other prefer light colors, this also shows a traits of their character.
Choice of clothes also vary among different age groups. An aged person is hardly seen wearing very colorful dress. Furthermore, a choice of feminine color by a man represents a gender neutral perception instilled in that person.
While agreeing that choice of clothes make an impression about an individual, one can get misguided by it if start to judge another person by seeing one day. So we ought not be quick in judging others rather analyze a trend of choice and then come to conclusion about the target’s personality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e and then come to conclusion about the targets personality
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78647686833 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40657820301 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 281.0 20.2975951904 1384% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1345.0 106.682146367 1261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 281.0 20.7667163134 1353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 108.0 7.06120827912 1529% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378737532833 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.378737532833 0.084324248473 449% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201364983382 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115526939527 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 141.6 13.0946893788 1081% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -205.28 50.2224549098 -409% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 111.7 11.3001002004 988% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.98 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.78 8.58950901804 242% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.4 10.1190380762 1131% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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