Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many arguments have been made on whether or not modern technology has made shopping easier in modern life. In my opinion, shopping had been much more convenient and efficient, thanks to the advancements of new technological developments.
First of all, shopping has become easier because you can buy amazing products in your wishlist everywhere, thanks to the development of online marketing and retailing. It is no longer required for customers to arrive at a certain shop and make their choices from what is displayed on the shelves or in the hallway. Ordering products from eBay or Amazon can now be done at home very simply, with a few taps, searches and payments. This also benefits buyers who are keen on preordering products that would make their arrivals in a few weeks, since it is now much easier to keep track of your products, even while you are at home.
Secondly, online shopping has allowed consumers to expand their choices of brands and sellers, allowing them to make choices closest to their preferences. The evolution of e-marketing gets buyers alluded to the vast lands of possibilities and options, simply by making a single click. The websites of all of the world's best retailers are all equipped with high-performance search tools, so that a customer would be able to find what matches best with their criteria, from basic products that are most budget-friendly to extremely rare goods that their local stores would never have to offer.
Aside from giving consumers a more convenient time buying their desired products, the advancements of modern technology have also taken its toll on a few aspects of online marketing. Security and privacy has been the most contentious issue since hackers can break through protections in banks and retail websites, resulting in their making unwanted purchases, which could prove costly to both the buyer and the sellers, if data on the transfers and those involved are not guarded properly. Besides, shopping nowadays could prove even more competitive due to all buyers' being able to buy the goods they need from their home. After only one night of missing a most-wanted product, you could wake up the next day knowing that it is out of stock.
However, the evolution of modern technology, which results in the developments of online marketing, is overall beneficial to consumers in various ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Many arguments have been made on whether or not modern technology has made shopping eas...
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Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...pping has become easier because you can buy amazing products in your wishlist every...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... making a single click. The websites of all of the worlds best retailers are all equipped ...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the best'.
Suggestion: worlds the best
...ingle click. The websites of all of the worlds best retailers are all equipped with high-pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07435897436 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75335071702 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8367254327 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.357142857 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135171423926 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536149702754 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679048568996 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871442647768 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831618155708 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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