Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, technology becomes a vital part of everyone’s life. While some people believe that the movies should be watched on smartphones and tablets, the theatre halls are not needed. However, others argue that cinemas are necessary to enjoy the film to the fullest. I tend to agree with the latter argument. 
 
On the one hand, advancement in technology brought us numerous gadgets, and the smartphone is the most popular and crucial device among all of them. Now, with the help of mobile phones, any video or TV series can be watched on your home without travelling to the movie halls. For instance, Netflix or Amazon Pay is two providers which made an entertainment hazel free and economical. In contrast, this watching experience could be a health issue for someone, because the viewing area of a mobile screen is small, which could constrain the eyes. As a result, someone could have a mild headache or severe cluster pain. 
 
On the other hand, the panoramic view of the cinema theatre screen and surround sound has no match. To illustrate, in the multiplexes, we have a comfortable sitting arrangement along with the option of opting for three-dimensional screening, which makes the movie watching great pleasure. This is the reason, movie budgets have been doubled up in recent years and the level of the quality risen drastically, although this experience comes with a high cost because multiplex tickets are expensive, which is why the audience generally plan the cinema hall visits once in weekends or twice in a month. 
 
To recapitulate, despite the advantages of cell phones as a portable amusement hub in the pocket, but in my opinion, the benefits of seeing a film in the cinema are more enjoyable and do not compromise our health, instead provide refreshment from the stressful life. 

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for instance, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02640264026 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83538880677 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.1020907 49.4020404114 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.3 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175571327824 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630920983471 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541614563145 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10523783846 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331072693655 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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