Some people say that parent should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's world, many parents are concerned about upbringing and development of their children. They want to provide best guidance and lifestyle to their children in order to get success in every possible situation, but the question arise here is how the parents should guide? How a child will emerge his/her talent?
To answer, some parents send their children to group activities such as sports, dancing, painting classes or karate classes. Group activities help children in learning cooperation and coordination. It also allows child to be socially active by making new friends, this will in turn help child's physical as well as mental development. Children can also understand their area of interest very well by performing group of tasks and this will help them to build successful career ahead.
While on the other hand, some parents believe that they should allow their children to spend time on their own. Knowledge can be gathered from internet or televisions. This is correct to some extent but this habit makes children introvert and child's physical development stops, also often it leads to unwanted knowledge. For instance, a child came across various type of drugs and learnt how to avail it which made him a drug addict in no time.
To sum up, as human is a social animal so spending time with group of people will always help individual to grow. In my opinion, parents should encourage their children to make new friends or go to various development classes. This will help their children to build stronger bonds and brighter future. A child is like a wet cement which molds in the shape it gets into, it is important that they explore as much as possible so that in future they can decide a person to be or not to be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...lopment of their children. They want to provide best guidance and lifestyle to their childre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85906040268 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50869395021 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0850608156 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31686277428 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119144260263 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961200318063 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205189274628 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164645594746 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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