Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family including uncles aunts and grandparents is better rather than only by parents Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and examples

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Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family including uncles, aunts and grandparents is better, rather than only by parents.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.

In today’s modern world, the importance of children’s fostering by no means negligible. However, some assert that nurturing children in extended family is more favorable than parents choosing to raise them on their own. Personally, I completely agree with this idea because of two significant reasons which will be elaborated in this essay
To begin with, the most rational justification is that growing up under the supervision of larger families reinforce the children’s social communication. Nowadays, most parents devote virtually their whole time to working which leaves them with little time to pay attention their children’s upbringing. This in turn could cause irreparable damage to their social skills. Therefore, by being kept in touch with other members of family such as grandparents, uncles and aunts, children find it easy to acquire the knowledge about society and broaden their horizons. From a social standpoint the children who live in extended family are more easy access to information which are required for them compared with their peers.
Yet another compelling argument in favor of this idea is that raising in bigger families helps children to develop a sense of self-esteem. To put it differently, children obtain more attention and care once they bring up in extended family through involving in group activities that are provided in family. This in turn, can help strengthen a sense of belonging and togetherness in the family, which is also beneficial for children’s self-esteem.
To sum up, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that children’s nurturing by the whole family could be helpful for them. Not only do children boost their social communication, but also this can to develop children’s self-esteem.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, such as, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42348754448 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00009076073 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7146154695 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223095907821 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872478499397 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375376425276 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145940338718 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01955282529 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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