Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion
A section of society believes that to alleviate the criminal offences it is a constructive way to keep the offenders in the cell for a longer period. However, others argue that there are other superior methods to mitigate crimes. In my opinion, keeping prisoner for a long time is not a feasible option since incurring the extra expense of government and other ways are more effective than this.
On the one hand, to reduce the crime rate it will be excellent if the offenders are in long jail time. This is because the prison will help them to stay away from the dark world of crime and the possibilities are more to commence the offence again which will have a detrimental effect on them and the community. For example, the research says that 75%, of criminals, do not want to be in prison for a lengthy period because it is exhausting and suffocating. This helps them to realize their mistakes and the fear of being in jail is also there.
On the other hand, keeping prisoners for the long term is expensive for the authorities it will be better if the legislation is restricted so that the criminals will be scared to commence any crime. Moreover, it helps to control, the violation and future criminals as well. For instance, in Saudi Arabia the law is at another level they do not keep the criminal in the cell they kill them in front of the audience. Due to which no one else will have the courage to step into the world of criminality. Therefore, such a restricted law impedes people to stay away from offences.
In conclusion, staying in prison for long-term might mitigate the rate of the violation. But in my opinion, it is better to restrict the regulation is the superior method to reduce the offence from the root.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59035270942 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493548387097 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0785477001 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147655027006 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522184028441 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453409246496 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995939754198 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360617795506 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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