Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.
To what extent do you agree?
It is often seen that the visitors struggle when they visit an unknown place because of dissimilarity in the tradition. A section of society feels that for betterment, the traveller should adjust to the cultural values of the place they are in. I strongly agree, with the above notation, because that is how they can explore the destination more closely and also essential for survival.
To begin with, when any tourist wants to get into a depth of any destination they should accommodate with the values, this can help them to get more familiar with the locals and the place. This is because then they will not feel isolated and can explore the interiors of the city. Moreover, such practices are beneficial while interacting with people's around because it becomes easy to communicate. For example, according to the survey by The University of Boston, suggests that a traveller must know the customs and traditional values since it is important to know the history of the place for any travellers to connect well while they are in the city. Hence, they should adjust so that it will be worth travelling.
Secondly, sustainability at the unexplored territory it is essential they must adjust according to the place. Since food is different across the borders the visitor will not get the same delicates what they have in their country so it becomes vital that, they should get adjusted to the destination. For instance, a tourist from India faces many challenges when they travel to countries like Thailand, and Japan since there are vast differences in the food culture. Therefore, if the traveller does not alter their habits accordingly will not be able to enjoy their trip and regret further.
To conclude, it is essential for a traveller to make adjustment as per the place they are travelling in so that they can enjoy their stay and will not face any problems like being left out due to unawareness about the place.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6497673677 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506097560976 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4248687543 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202305292281 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766117628858 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360954836778 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126885616827 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281272590571 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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