Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.
To what extent do you agree?
It is generally believed by masses that foreign culture ought to be adapted by those people who travel abroad. On the whole, I agree with this notion since it removes cultural barriers and increases adaptability among individuals of different nations; however, I also accept that some people devalue their own traditional cultures.
To begin with, cultural adaptations strengthen the bond between a native person and a traveler. This is because if a foreigner participates in the local rituals and ceremonies, then he would be happily accepted by the society. Although in the beginning exploring a foreign country might be challenging for some, the respect towards their customs act as saviour for them. Moreover, people also get an advantage of having communications with the locals in order to learn more about their culture. Once they become actively involved with the natives their chances of societal isolation reduces to zero.
Furthermore, a person traveling to different nation's broadens their knowledge by interacting with locals, and it has also been seen that some of them prefer to settle in the country which suits them. For example, Canada and Australia are the top most selected destinations around the world, owing to the holistic environment provided by the country to the foreigners. On the other hand, there are some individuals who put down their own ancient cultures so as to adapt the foreign customs; instead, they should introduce their rituals to them, which alleviate culture barriers amongst nations.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, it is true to say that adapting host countries' practices will not only improve cultural tolerance but also develop respect for each another's nation. Those who feel their customs are too backward to celebrate or to introduce in the society should understand that the uniqueness of the cultures make them different from each other's culture around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the whole, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34868421053 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74321594589 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8375927345 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240018915477 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872642439063 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049340715942 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15429585059 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322105608367 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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