Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Technology has become increasingly popular over the period of time with many benefits to communicate openly in this modern society. However, people believe that this modern era of advanced science and technology is impacting their social behavior in negative and positive ways. In this essay, I will discuss how it is helping people to become friendlier by interacting with people from different countries, and also how it is making them less sociable by using online medium of communication rather than in-person meet. Furthermore, I will give my opinion that modernization is helping people vigorously in improving social behavior.
Modernization has many cons on making people more interactive and sociable due to advancement among social media applications such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram. Nevertheless, it has improved their overall confidence to communicate effectively and in friendly way. Because of these modern social media applications to communicate, now introvert people are able to express their feelings and thoughts among others which help them to become more sociable and friendly.
On the other hand, it has some drawbacks also which are making people less friendly and interactive by not meeting their friends’ in-person or face to face. First and foremost, online applications such as skype and zoom which allows us to communicate on video calls, but disallow them not to meet others. People, who lives at long distances, for instance, are not able to meet their close friends and family members for a long period of time, because they prefer to communicate on social media and other online application, and it results in less social interaction.
In my opinion, if people use these advanced online applications to communicate then they could improve their social behavior rapidly. Therefore, they should communicate using these online websites such as Whatsup, Viber and Google, which could be helpful in improving their public communication skills in community.
To sum up, technological benefits of modernization could be helpful among people to make them more sociable, but on the other hand, it can also lead to become less sociable by not interacting with others face to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42774566474 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94023123887 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494219653179 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6264267196 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.461538462 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253262196769 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10390359438 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836755217159 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164829131134 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914008698334 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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