Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of a society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this.
Family and school are the two most important institutions in a person's life as he gets most of the educations from there. How well one's future will be and what his society can expect from him largely depends on the types of education he got from family and education system in his early years of life. Both have their share of impact on us. However, family, for me, has a greater influence on a child than school as we first start our life in a family then go to school.
For some people, the school has a great effect on a person's life. To make a person a good citizen, an asset to his country good schooling is a must and it is true in some aspects. It is the educational institutes from which we learn about civic rules, get a good sense of right or wrong. In today's world, some specific kind of skill set is necessary to get a decent job and become financially independent which is mostly provided by educational institutions. Schools give us the opportunity to mix with other people and share our thoughts with them. while our education starts at home, it is the education system which takes care of education for the rest of our life.
However, we spent the first five to six years of our life mostly with our parents and family members. Numerous studies have already shown that how a child is treated in his early years, has a grave impact on his upcoming life. Our learning starts since we are born and our brains are already developed to some extent before we enter school. If a child is born is an inconvenient family condition, then he is most likely to end up as a criminal or drug addict as studies shows. Even a great educational institution may not reverse the negative effects he already has got from his family.
Teaching from parents is the ultimate echelon of learning for a human being. Good schooling indeed has some major tasks to do but it will not be as effective as desired in a person's life if his family is not suitable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...he two most important institutions in a persons life as he gets most of the educations ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... of the educations from there. How well ones future will be and what his society can...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ple, the school has a great effect on a persons life. To make a person a good citizen, ...
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Suggestion: While
...eople and share our thoughts with them. while our education starts at home, it is the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ill not be as effective as desired in a persons life if his family is not suitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47777777778 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44074056511 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6977199849 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14981121295 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573087696362 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457191639724 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114734771183 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496046767365 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.