Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that parents have responsibilities to show their kids how to be good citizens while others think that children should learn this at schools. This essay agrees with the first point and will show that although teachers at schools are closer to their pupils, parents have the most influence on their children.
On one hand, how to grow up to be a good humanity is parents’ duty on their children because they spend their whole childhood living with their parents. When they are toddlers or preschoolers, they follow their parents and behave in the same way their parent treat them and other people. After they go to schools, they are also influenced by their parents acting because that is the behavior they see everyday. For example, Katie who was sexual assaulted by her brother said that his thought on sex was wrong because he had followed their parent to the sexy club near their house every night. Therefore, I believe that parents are responsible for their children behaviors since kids are living with their parents until they are at least 18 years old.
On the other hand, schools where teachers play the most important role are the best place for young people to learn how to behave good because teachers are always understand their students more than the others. Children are spending more time at schools than that at home; therefore, they tent to get closer to their teachers who listen to their problems and show them what is the best way to deal with that. To illustrate, by the understanding and the advising of my high school form teacher, my classmate who had been a very naughty and low grade student became one of the highest ranking student of the school. However, affection of schools and teachers on children is not long and strong enough to change their behaviors completely.
In conclusion, although teachers at schools spend more time with their students and affect their behaviors in certain stage of their life, this essay believes that parents have more influence on how children behave to the other people because they are staying with their parents for their growing up duration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...g because that is the behavior they see everyday. For example, Katie who was sexual assa...
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Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...behave good because teachers are always understand their students more than the others. Ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88154269972 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37168484633 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487603305785 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0698906323 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.666666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277452995842 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129325516094 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701579480937 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199638141601 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412302011907 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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