Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that actions of individuals are wasteful and irrelevant, and it is only government and large businesses that can make a difference. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In recent times there have been a dramatic change in the weather conditions. While many believe that these changes can be controlled by taking important measures at an individual level, others are against this opinion and think that this problem can only be tackled by government and organizations. I accord with the former opinion and in my below essay I will discuss both the views with examples.
On the one hand, there are people who think that prevention of climate change is possible by individual efforts and I completely agree with this. Is the distorted weather condition not because of human interference? The answer is yes. One of the significant reasons behind this change is deforestation. If everyone understands his responsibilities and plants trees, there will be a drastic change in the present climatic conditions. For example, if each resident of a city, with a population of one lakh, plants a tree, there would be sufficient plants to combat pollution. This will bring in more rain and this will further acclimatize the weather conditions.
On the other hand, government and big industries also plays a critical role in this. By imposing strict rules on deforestation and by motivating people to grow more trees, they can contribute in diminishing pollution. For example, in several Indian states, cutting trees is considered as a criminal activity and heavy fines are levied. Also, there are several companies which perform CSR activities wherein they encourage people for planting trees. Moreover, these initiatives help a great deal to slow down the pace of climate change
In conclusion, I concur that though government and companies can contribute in balancing the weather conditions through stringent rules and CSR activities, it cannot be done without the support of people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25517241379 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92054919664 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3357857909 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160411305718 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451101165622 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631007328166 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966483498041 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417901845792 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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