Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer.
Write at least 250 words.
Issue regarding to an increasing number of crimes made by youngsters seems to attract more and more attention all over the world. possible causes of that growth appear to be focussed in three areas, and variable solutions also appear to be feasible.
Perhaps the main factor here is poor monetary status of families where criminal youngsters live. it seems to be apparent that the majority of crimes is made by young people in order to improve their financial conditions. For example, many experts state that huge scope of crimes is observed in the poorest neighbourhoods, and this pattern appears to be global. Another underlying factor is a lack of education and, therefore, unsatisfactory employment opportunities. Without a job many young seem to be forced to seek other ways to earn money for living, and often criminal activity appears to be these ways. finally, such problems in youngsters’ families as subpar parental relations and childhood feelings of abandonment might be a reason of involving adolescents in organized crime. Indeed, criminal bands may substitute family for young people because they can offer strong brotherhood and family feelings and cause positive emotions of courage and self-confidence.
Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be conscious efforts by governments to increase employment, especially among sectors of population with poor monetary status. A second remedy might be providing subsidized education in order to make it affordable for wider sector of population. this may significantly increase chances of employment for particular person and, respectively, decrease involving in criminal activity. finally, parents should pay more attention to a bond between them and their children, create an atmosphere of love and care in their families, and make efforts to provide opportunities to children to go in for sports.
In summary, the factors of poverty and toxic relations in families appear to be the main causes. A coordinated response by the state, society and parents may well lessen the severity of situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42901234568 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03672963415 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6480325154 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914513132184 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308849337024 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232175625037 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488897402039 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258289153275 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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