Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one Give reasons for your answer & include any examples from your own knowledge or experience
The trend of imposing ban on cellphones in school premises is slowly catching up. I believe that it is a positive step towards effective education. This essay will discuss how it increases participation of students simultaneously reducing the chances of cheating and cyber bullying along with relevant examples to support my points.
To begin with, pupils tend to be more attentive in class when they do not have any electronic gadgets along. This will improve the quality of learning and thus have a positive impact on the results. In addition to this, there could be a rise in student participation in various curricular and extra curricular activities as the scope of distraction has been greatly reduced. To illustrate this, an Oxford University research states that the registration for school sports teams have increased by 100% during a semester when mobiles were disallowed. Therefore it is conclusively clear than restricting electronic devices such as portable phones in educational institutions act as catalyst in development of young minds.
Secondly, it removes the chances of cheating in examinations and also negates cyberbullying of school goers. There is often a scenario where smart students tend to look up the answers for test questions in search engines such as google or online encyclopedia using a web browser in their smartphones resulting in unfair grades. Furthermore, it also negates the risk of tough boys and girls teasing juniors and exposing them on internet. For instance, a high school student from the Florida state school has recorded a video of a senior girl in shower and posted online effecting girls mental health. Thus is it possible to state that it aids in having a fair assessment of test taker’s intelligence and also reduce modern day bullying.
In conclusion, despite its advantages in my opinion prohibiting cell phones into educational campus will cause less distractions allowing pupils to experience the school life like old days and also reduces unlawful.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27414330218 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95451621422 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641744548287 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9027501234 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.928571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202036351166 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586206189584 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282526370831 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10072438392 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401084851154 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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