In some countries people of all age groups are engaging in too many sports or over-exercising. Are there more advantages or drawbacks to this development?
Fitness is a trending topic among people regardless of age or gender. Despite its advantages for some, I believe that it such inclination has more negative impact. This essay will discuss effects on body due to playing sports and also the reasons to be cautious during certain stages of life along with relevant examples to support my points.
To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that participating in any games or working out regularly is a double edged sword. Despite its benefits, an individual is prone to injure their body as opposed to a non fitness enthusiast. The central reason to this is lack of proper care and delusional of their body limits. This will result in wear and tear of vital body part and in some cases long term disabilities. To illustrate this, a report from WHO outlines that people who exercise more that 12 hours a week suffer in free movement of limbs at age of 60. Therefore it is conclusively that excess movement of body in young age will take a toll on their physique consequently slowing them down when older.
Secondly, pregnant women and people above 55 have also jumped the bandwagon of working out regularly which is not advisable. Over physical movement while carrying a baby inside is harmful not only to the mother but also to the unborn. In addition to this, it could also effect the heart to function irregularly which is devastating for the elderly. For instance, an Oxford University survey suggests that sample with average age of 57has showed a pattern of inconsistent heart rate and scarring of heart tissue when worked out continuously for few years. Thus it is possible to state that following the trend without estimating the consequences could prove fatal to some.
To sum up, in my opinion anything has to be done in limitation especially activities that could have a lasting impact afterwards. Furthermore, individuals should also be mindful of their age and body condition prior to embracing a fitness schedule.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71193507237 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0765565582 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154013672245 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478801883813 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418685232266 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889195452987 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492182176732 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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