Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, number of sports considerable rise including the unsafe and hazardous one. There are many reasons why few people like such games. This essay intends to analyse the various causes along with some suggestions on issue.
To embark upon, few think as thrill. In the present scenario most of the people enjoy dangerous sports because they find is fun and adventure. For example, now a day every second youngster wants to try bungee jumping, rock climbing etc. like games so that the can challenge their potentials and abilities. Also, with this they overcome from fear of failure which gives sense of satisfaction.
Secondly, another reason is such games involved big price money, if we talk about some competition like bike racing. These tournaments, grab attention the attention from media and anyone become famous. I can reminisce, one of my colleagues he was very interested in related stunts and performing on intercity bike racing competition that gave him so much popularity that he became model for Yamaha India 2010 and many businesses asked him to endorsement their product.
To recapitulate, I would like to address few advices which need to be taken. Such sports should be done under supervision from experts. All the safety measure keeps in mind before encouraging these games. Also, training should be compulsory before taking part and the company who are conducting have proper licence to do this. However, banning said events is not the solution. Hence, proper supervision, training and valid licence can decrease the risk involved in such game.
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Suggestion:
...crease the risk involved in such game.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19921875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59372352679 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69140625 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1313471559 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2941176471 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2260972612 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585548281925 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514306873618 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12866512168 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556842895022 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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