In spite of advances made in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case ?
What can be done about this problems?
In spite of advances made in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry
People living in poverty can not afford nutritious food for themselves and families. This makes them weaker, physically and mentally,so they are less able to earn the money that would help them escape poverty and hunger. The effects can be long-standing.
Furthermore,they are condemned to a life of poverty and hunger. Similarly,in developing countries, farmers often can't afford seeds,so they can not plant the crops that would provide for their families. They may haven to cultivate crops without the tools and fertilizers they need. Moreover,in recent years, price of food products has been very unstable. Families need access to adequate food all year round.
Natural disasters such as floods, tropical storms and long periods of drought are on the increase with calamitous consequences for the hungry poor in developing countries. Drought is already one of the most common causes of food shortage in the world. Most affrican farmers are less productive than a US farmer was 100years ago. There is a consensus between NGOs and governments that supporting and training small farmers is the best possible solution to future food security.
In conclusion, I think hunger is a huge problem with that really needs to be solved as fast as possible. It affects 925 million people and kills millions each year. You can help big organisations that fight world hunger by donating on their website.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, similarly, so, still, i think, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21757322176 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81108032276 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648535564854 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7094446951 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174650200605 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498875195858 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892115455886 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144578301939 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174779577846 0.056905535591 307% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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