Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas What are your opinions on this

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Supermarkets should only sell food produced from within their own country rather than imports from overseas.
What are your opinions on this?

Many are increasingly believing that instead of selling both local and imported food, retail food stores should sell only the former. For some compelling reasons, which will be discussed now, I do not concur with this sentiment.
In my opinion, local as well as foreign produce should be available in the marketplace.

To begin with, in some countries, there is a scarcity of arable land which forces them to sign trade agreements in order to meet the demand of its population. For instance, although many middle Eastern countries have rich economies, they cannot grow their own food due to unfavourable farming conditions. Similarly, countries facing harsh climate, namely Canada and the UK, import large proportions of food. If such countries decide to sell only locally grown food, they will not me able to feed their demographic. Furthermore, if shops have just local food, it deprive people of the chance to consume international food. In other words, they will be left with limited options to chose from. Only by selling a variety of different food products can the general populace be able to taste exotic fruits and vegetables. For instance, Kiwi that is native to Australia, is now widely available throughout the world. Lastly, import and export seem to only only help in building stronger international relationships between countries but also create global recognition for countries involved.

Having said that, some people contend that local food is more nutritious since they are not packed with chemicals and preservatives that are usually used for preserving food that are exported to long distance. Buying food locally assist support local farmers and agriculture industry.

In conclusion, while there are some convincing arguments against selling international food, in my view, the benefits accrued from importing food outweigh the downsides.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, similarly, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37414965986 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77865135044 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4087412751 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269035361338 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088441449708 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606998697848 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146736358539 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586923128781 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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