Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To
what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the
cultural development of your society?
The technology has spread its legs to every nook and corner of the world. There are numbers of channels available on the television which give you essential knowledge as well as put impact on every human’s life. a camp of society thinks that television influences to a culture of communities. according to my point of view, television affects the cultural development of society in both positive and negative way. I will elaborate it in the following paragraphs of this essay.
The first and foremost positive impact of television spreads encourages in numbers of society about cultural events celebration. In other words, nowadays the events which are related to cultures are celebrating as well as presenting in a good way on different levels such as on state level or on broadcast on television through nation channel of a nation. As affected by this activity and they also start their cultural fests on the local level such as in their towns and in villages. This entire activity brings and their traditional culture. To add to it, through television persons can also present information about their own cultures to the other people who perhaps lives in the distinct parts of the globe. By this, all world can know about all cultures and traditions.
On the contrast, television also puts a bad impact on the members of a community. It is inevitable that presentations related to several cultures and customs broadcast on television through different channels, So all human beings watch these acts. Then they just want to become like alien masses and adopt foreign customs, traditional cultural activities and so on. as a result, they forget their own cultural and indulge in another tradition.
To conclude, every coin has two sides. If television spreads information about cultures to increase their development, then it also can become a great cause of a precious culture is death. I believe television ought to present only that events which might be proved fruitful for development of all cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, well, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10876132931 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81786479273 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525679758308 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1039040609 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243709685569 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841076324882 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859708771188 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165751112368 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692847496328 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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