today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Submitted by jilany on Fri, 09/14/2018 - 11:22

Nowadays, a significant number of tourists prefer to travel to hard conditions places, such as Amazon forests or the north and south poles. Although this adventure has a lot of benefits, like, the enjoyment and discovery, but there are some drawbacks, for example, dangerous, lack of support, and lack of information have to be taken in account.
On the one hand, there are a lot of positive aspects for tourists while visiting a difficult environment. Firstly, they will enjoy their new challenge with full of an enthusiasm and a resilience spirit. Secondly, many people willing to travel there for discovering new animals, life, researches, and experiments to help humans for better life. Finally, many tourists search for a new place to live in because their country became overcrowded. For these advantageous, tourists will gain more jubilant when travel to there.
Conversely, while travellers go to bad conditions places they will have a lot of difficulties. one problem is that these places are significantly dangerous because they have unknown animals, very dark, and it is rare to find people there. Another possible issue, lack of support in case of major problems or accident, for instance, man down and he needs to transfer to hospital. Moreover, lack of sources or information may lead to a flawed plan or an inaccurate decision. Furthermore, most properly we have to spend more money for visiting these kinds of areas. Consequently, these areas have some negative aspects for tourists while visiting.
In conclusion, while people enjoy and discover these difficult places in very far areas, there are a considerable dangerous as lack of information and support may lead to a risky journey. having weighed up the pros and cons, this adventure almost equal in both sides.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16206896552 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86910021236 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2142498146 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216710292361 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753748884577 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622817830681 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122108921467 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542238048966 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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