Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Technological advancement and the internet explosion over the last few decades have given people an access to information and knowledge that was earlier never available to them. They are aware of places which were not even heard of earlier. Higher levels of income have led to higher spending power of individuals, thereby giving them more resources to reach and explore challenging places like the Sahara desert and the Antarctic. That is probably the reason why today several tourists have started choosing to visit destinations where conditions are difficult. Television shows like Man vs. Wild have further added to this pattern by inducing a certain level of excitement among them.
Scanty population in these areas not just helps the travellers rejuvenate themselves in isolation but also provide them a spectacular view of the untouched natural beauty while giving them an opportunity to be away from the urban way of living. Successful completion of these trips, boost the confidence levels manifold.
These destinations are certainly magnificent but also come with various perils associated with them. 16 Hours is a movie based upon a real life incident where a traveller, who is on a solo trip, gets trapped in a mountain crack with his arm stuck under an enormous rock for 16 hours with no food, no water and no one around to his rescue. These places test the survival instincts to the fullest and may even turn out to be life threatening.
In conclusion, no matter how fascinating it may appear, the crucial thing before undertaking such adventurous trips is to do a proper research, weigh all the related pros and cons and then decide whether or not it is worth taking a risk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...e related pros and cons and then decide whether or not it is worth taking a risk.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03191489362 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73855539099 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673758865248 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.624551579 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160363300881 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048374497841 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071226226181 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682285258399 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712158767545 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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