University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that more and more university students tend to continue their study in oversea for a master degree. Some people believe that there are many advantages. I totally agree this statement.
Admittedly, to apply an oversea university's offer will place a heavy financial burden on most of the normal families. To compare with the local citizens, oversea students have to pay 3 to 4 times about the tuition fee to the schools. In addition, students have to get a par time job after school to save some living costs.
However, the above argument is biased, since it fails to consider the benefits to study abroad. For one thing, to study in the other country helps students to access an independent living style. Students need to decide where they should stay and who is going to be their roommates. They also need to learn how to take good care of themselves, such as cooking and washing clothes. What I have heard that a oversea study can get rid of the "baby king" title after graduated from school due to their independence.
For another, studying in the oversea school explores students' horizons. The teachers and professors are all coming from different countries. They can display many aspects according by their experience. For example, learning a degree in Sydney university , students have a chance to discuss the climate change issues with the professor who is coming from Iceland where have an serious impact of the melting ice caps. That is helpful to student to understand more the disadvantages not only from the books.
To sum up, students may have to pay numerous tuition fee for the oversea studying,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for example, in addition, such as, for one thing, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94223826715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59284657702 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1260937364 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211686830467 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646399479718 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587349591059 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110662970372 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582117750823 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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