Violence in the media promote violence in the society. To what extent do you agree?
According to the fair amount of people, Broadcasting violent content over the media leads to violence against people. The essay topic absolutely agrees because brutal videos or content telecasted have a negative impact on the young generation and terror outfits uses social media as a source, to spread hatred in people.
At the present time, Adolescents spend approximately 5-6 hours watching videos over television, such as cartoons or movies, In many movies today, they have more of violent content like, a brutal murder, a communial violence or a rape. There are perilous content on the other form on media. As a result, young children are more exposed towards brutality and tend to behave alike. They start believing that to resolve an issue or a problem by these violent methods and put themselves into a crime. For example, there was a news a couple of months ago that a student of class eight standard murdered his junior of class sixth standard and reason for this tragedy was the latter didn't give seat in the school bus.
Furthermore, many terror groups utilises social media to float videos of mass killings, people getting slaughtered on the name of religion with a motive to divide them based on communial system. They circulate these videos content to lure people by joining them for their benefits. Terrorist forge hatred in people for their own country. For instance, one of the most detrimental terror outfit ISIS, opt muslim community people train and ameliorate them towards hatred for the folks from other communities to hamper them with terror activities.
In conclusion, Media spread the violence by showing violent content and young masses get affected by these promotions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13978494624 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53959282913 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.656637052 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100200719293 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417597826002 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503059409918 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830139971965 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537657933163 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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