What difficulties will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
Many countries have different challenges to deal with them and potential solutions as well. In this essay, I will describe numerous hardships my country might encounter in the next decade and would also suggest a few remedies for them.
Developing nations have a unique Set of issues ranging from overpopulation, industrialization, healthcare, the provision of infrastructure, poverty, law & order and regulations for various institutions. Each country defines its priorities to deal with such problems by considering the urgency of a mater and the resources at its disposal. Furthermore, a good rapport with neighbours and the international community is paramount as it can seek guidance and support from them.
I belong to a developing country and the challenges it could face in the upcoming years are quite critical. A first and foremost problem could be the scarcity of water which can lead the nation into a famine and threatens the lives of millions. The government needs to act for it on an emergency basis by planting trees and building nation-wide water reservoirs.
In addition to this, my country’s 65% population is a youth and Government face a daunting challenge to create jobs for them. This could be achieved by promoting and facilitating private sectors which can absorb at least 50% of this section. Moreover, a huge investment would be required to cater to the growing needs of the public and private sectors.
Additionally, a brain drain could be disastrous for my country as the data shows that a large number of doctors and other professionals are moving abroad to earn the livelihood. Considering a huge cost spent on educational professional grooming of these individuals, it is a blow to the economy. The Government should provide adequate remuneration to avail the services of these professionals locally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s of the public and private sectors. Moreover, a brain drain could be disastrous for ...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s for my country as the data shows that a large number of doctors and other professionals are mov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28231292517 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22794819134 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9346905975 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18550245501 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580059639073 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376075107657 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936145370406 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253528475962 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.