The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations.Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest a has been updated.
Population rise, a widely accepted as one of the main precursors to the country`s challenges, should be one of the highest priorities. A significant high rate of population is measured in many countries, and it leads to a deterioration in a country`s development and industrialization. This essay will suggest firstly, some problems caused by the increase of country`s population, and then submit some viable solutions for this worrying trend.
Population, in spite of enabling the country to have the required workforce in the local job market, has destructive effects in the long term. Countries have a very limited budget to their basic facilities such as healthcare, education and shelter; therefore, the increase in the number of inhabitants will significantly affect the quality of these services. For instance, some African countries, where in Angola and Kongo, suffer from the low quality of education and the increase rate of deaths due to the huge population which its consumption is relatively more than the country income. Furthermore, undeveloped countries with limited fund resources do not have the required projects which secure enough job opportunities to the nation; hence, unemployment rate increased where population rate is out of control.
On the contrary, there are some viable solutions can be taken to cope or limit the rise in population rate, and these shall be in contribution between government and individuals. Government should consider the huge number of inhabitants as a driving force to the economy and start to utilize it in new national projects. For example, China has a huge population in Asia, and they started several mega projects to cope this high rate in positive outcomes. In addition, laws and regulation to be set by government to control the number of children in each family to control the community and enhance the basic facilities.
Based on above-mentioned facts, one`s can conclude that population has its critical drawbacks on the country, but some solutions play a pivotal role in a country`s development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in spite of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41590214067 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25659213952 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.1348255868 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.583333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138132779648 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540600437109 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752614646888 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836226573212 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631879434619 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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