WRITING TASK2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expeñence.
Write at least 250 words
The ideology behind culture, character relating to choice of clothes has been debatable over the last two decades. However, some school of thoughts upholds the believes that both culture and character depicts choice of clothes and contrary is the stand of the other school of thoughts. This essay will discuss the stands
The beauty of culture relating to character by a different ideology stands to the fact that the choice of clothes can be obtained as fact. There are several cultures which can’t be numbered and operates different attributes such as the Indians and the Arabians. At a glance of sight, it can be deduced what the culture emanates, although this medium illuminates thoughts about the character to which the personality hails from, hence the options of dressing tells. Generally speaking, this process speaks volume and it’s been 90% tested to be thorough with respect to human nature.
On the contrary, a different thought stands to the ideology that both personality and tradition does not depict the choice of clothes. However, there are examples of circumstances to which other cultures is been induced dominantly over another culture such as a Nigerian who spent all the early part of his/her life at the unite kingdom tends to think and see situations as the British and this however has over-ridden the default tradition incumbent in the Nigerian; hence choice of clothes doesn’t reveals the default genetic race however, it reveals the interim tradition of the British. This also has been tested and proven standard. Although, this can be nullified as a result of human nature under pretence and disguise which is a limiting factor to such ideology.
In conclusion, either school of thoughts stands true from the view of point which is also susceptible to circumstances surrounding the culture, character and options on choice of clothes with respect to human factor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...er, some school of thoughts upholds the believes that both culture and character depicts...
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Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghts. This essay will discuss the stands The beauty of culture relating to charac...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t all the early part of his/her life at the unite kingdom tends to think and see situatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19417475728 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66175672029 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.220159361 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.909090909 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128536631303 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054274938834 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363578558189 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802648325523 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245716933303 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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