113. The government has announced that it plans to build a
new university. Some people think that your community
would be a good place to locate the university. Compare
the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new
university in your community. Use specific details in your
discussion.
The location of a university is very important for the
surrounding and the university itself. There is no
shortage of debate about whether it is better or not to
build a new university located in our community. In my
opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of
this decision.
On one hand, it is advantagous to locate the university in
our community becasue it can provide much more stores and
shops in this area. A university means a lot of students
will come into this area. In order to satisfy the needs of
lots of students, different kinds of shops are more
likely to station in our community. Not only laundry shop
but also salon and other types of stores will bring more
conveience to our commumity.
On the other hand, with too many students around our
community, it will become more complex and annoying for
the residents. Futhermore, students may have different
activities which may bother the routine of our community.
For example, university students may have a welcome party
at night, which may disturb the life of people in the
community. With many other students in and out this area,
the security of the community is also a potential problem.
Although there are both advantages and disadvantages of
establishing a new university in our community, I think
that the good part is overweight than the bad part. It is
clear that university is a place for academic study so the
students come to learn rather than paly. What's more,
there is no doubt that university may stand a rule and
discipline their students which means that we don't need
to worry about the security problem that mcuh.
In conclusion, it is very important for university to
choose a place to locate. As a community to become the
suitable location means it is a nice palce for the student
to live in and study. With the collaberation between
university and community, the advantages will definitely
overweight than the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24545454545 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83722629979 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460606060606 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.566198236 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.53405017921 772% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 51.0 5.5376344086 921% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182628992825 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693815876225 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596639258064 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528091069741 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705587493549 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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