Agree or disagree it is better to work for business owned by someone you don t know than the business owned by your family

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Agree or disagree: it is better to work for business owned by someone you don't know than the business owned by your family.

While some people tend to think that it is better to work for business owned by their family than the strangers, others seem to disagree with it. In my opinion, I believe that working for business owned by our family is better, and the following discussion can reveal my reasoning and stands.

To begin with, if we work for business owned by our family, we would have the same responsibility for the whole company, and can benefit the company. For example, I worked for business owned by my father last year. I always have a responsibility of the company since I thought the company is mine too. I worked exhausted on lots of details and made an effort on everythings. My father appreciated my attitude during the whole year because the company earned lots of money. This example demonstrated that working for business owned by our family can have benefit to the company and we would have the responsibility.

The second point is that working for business owned by our family can have more flexible time on working. Lots of companies have the strict rule that the employees may not have the flexible time to relax or do their own things. Nonetheless, if we work for business owned by our relatives, we can have more flexible time. Since the supervisors or the boss are our family, if we finish our works, we can discuss with them and we would not feel emabrrassed. What is more? The rule of company can be more flexible and comfortable to the employees.

Ture, some people might say that if we work for business owned by our family, we would not have ambition or enthusiastic during working since we the company is owned by our relatives. However, this belief fools to consider the fact that lots of the families can only make money by those companies. That is to say, if they do not make an effort on their business, they would starve or bankruptcy, so they would pay more attention and be awareness on the business than people who work for business owned by the strangers. Therefore, it is hard to convince people of this idea.

To sum up, with the reasons mentioned above, I believe that working for business owned by our relatives is better. There seems to be some validity to other points of view. Nevertheless, I still think that my reasons of my opinion are stronger.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, what is more, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65185185185 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58608707604 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414814814815 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8475599957 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335903056726 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126656836211 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126413987402 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244520202148 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917742209783 0.0645574589148 142% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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