Agree or disagree. It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Nowadays people are highly exposed into the events happening around the world by the social media. The question comes, is it necessary to know about the events happening around the world? As far as I am concerned, I believe that people do not have to know about those events happening worldwide for the following reasons.
To begin with, people have more important things to do, rather than spend their valuable time on those event or news that are irreverent to them. Only if they keep themselves away with those noisy news and events can they be more devoted to their own business, such as studying or working. Take my friend Taylor for example. She is a university student and like to read tweets and news on Twitter. When the finals came, she cannot help spending 10 hours a day to read the news about those tweets and news on Twitter, instead of be devoted to what she should do-study for the final exam. In the end, she failed her final exam and decided to be more devote to study rather than keep care about those events happening around the world. Therefore, people should mind their own important things and keep themselves from distracted by those news and events.
Moreover, social media will bury us with meaningless spams. Those social media will keep sending us the notification of the events you are not interested in, such as a singer is having a birthday. And it is very time-consuming to find the events you really like in those notifications. Take myself for example. At first, I like to read those events and stuffs. However, after spending many meaningless hours reading those events that have nothing to do with me, I find that social media have kept sending me notification of those events, which is so annoying. And they did not improve my life at all. Therefore, I believe that it is not worthwhile to spend time on those events that are highly likely those meaningless spams.
Admittedly, some events may benefit myself by telling about some important events that might impact my life. But I think that it is unnecessary to spend timeless hours to read those events or news. If those events will have impact on my own life, I will know about them eventually. So, I think ordinary people like me do not need to know those events on purpose.
In a nutshell, I still hold the idea that people do not have to know about those events happening worldwide.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'those events'?
Suggestion: this event; those events
...ather than spend their valuable time on those event or news that are irreverent to them. On...
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Line 5, column 830, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
... and keep themselves from distracted by those news and events. Moreover, social media...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7119047619 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41712522039 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440476190476 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9534100344 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0434782609 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2608695652 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226404495416 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883952811242 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819369191787 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173173975134 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780616231595 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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