Thanks to the development of technology, in future decades, societies will face a lot of changes and among all these developments car companies are pioneers. While some believes that the use of cars will be reduced in near future, I believe that not only the number of vehicles in the streets will not decrease but also they will become a valuable possession among youth. How these changes would happen? I will explain my reasons in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, the special features which is being shown on the new generation of cars are the tip of the iceberg and as time passes, car companies will eventually reveale their progress in inveting new technologies in their cars in a way that answer their customers' demands. Therefore, the produced cars are going to be more comfortable and more efficient. For example, Tessla company, which produce electric machines is working on a new generation of cars which use oxygen as fuel and can be driven for 48 hours nonstop. As a result, by the time when the petrol in becoming rare, still people can drive cars. For this reason, I believe that there are going to be more cars in the streets.
Secondly, families life style is changing day in day out. Physical activities has decreased and it is becoming difficult for families to live without a car. Besides, Thanks to drivethroughs, driving a car and carrying out all shoppings has made people lazy. For example, Mc Donald, Starbucks or even pharmacies and ATMs all have drivethrough options all aorund the cities. Consequently, everyone who is eligible for driving, needs a car and since the populations are gorwing the number of cars will increase.
In the light of above mentioned- reasons, I strongly believe that having a car is going to be essential for adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'developments'' or 'development's'?
Suggestion: developments'; development's
...ce a lot of changes and among all these developments car companies are pioneers. While some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85855263158 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71393939112 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9566156453 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198540251951 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645907930216 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510225202811 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115658315879 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500485603928 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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