With the rapid development of our society, the pace of daily life has greatly changed correspondingly . It is not uncommon that people nowadays are increasingly busy with their work and study and tend to spare less time for their families. As a result, people have fewer regularly meals with their beloved ones . However, I do not think it is wise to leave out family meals because enjoying meals around the table can bring us many benefits including experience sharing and relationship promotion.
On one hand, for parents and children, family meals provide an opportunity to share their recent experience and learn from each other. During family meals, parents can talk about their work and exchange their insight about the recently social events, and thus children can have a general understanding of the situations confronting them in the future.. Besides, the individual views can be cultivated during this process. I would like to use my personal experience to illustrate this. my mother is used to talk about interesting things she encounters in her work. As she is an accountant, I knew the primary responsibilities of an accountant at a very young age and even planned to be an accountant in the future. It’s worth noting that this kind of table communication is of bilateral benefits, thus parents can also be the beneficial owner. Generally, children are more familiar of the latest social trend, enabling their parent to be informed of thelatest trend and renovating their points Otherwise, parents may easily feel confused with the fast-changing world. So it is important and meaningful for people to have regularly family meals together.
On the other hand, family meals help to promote relationship between the members. Several factors contribute this point. Firstly, the preparation of family meals need cooperation. Through the discussion of different members’ tasks, the skill of tacit understanding can be easily cultivated. Secondly, when meals are finished, mutual compliments are likely to remove previous misunderstandings and narrow the distance to each other. Especially for couples, we all know that passion between lovers tends to decrease as time goes by. Regularly family meals strengthen their bonds and make it possible for couples to communicate and appreciate their love and care for their companion. Therefore, regularly family meals are necessary in people’s life.
In conclusion, although modern people have busy schedule nowadays and don’t have much free time, it is still of significant importance to spend time gathering with families on table as it not only can enhance the family relationship but also warm the heart of each family member.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33255269321 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9621381225 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569086651054 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4896173046 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32033511836 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103758179492 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142089854393 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212029975715 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354566512843 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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