If you want to change one aspect to improve your health, which would you choose? Why?
1. The kinds of food you eat
2. The amount of the exercise you do
3. The amount of the stress in your life
The world, in which we live, has undergone enormous transitions and human being health is not an exception. New life style, unhealthy food, long hours of work, to name but a few, are examples of reasons which are responsible for people health deterioration as a serious propblem in today's era. In this line of thought, man kind have employed a wide variety of methodes ranging from modifying diet to chenge in life style to increase the level of health in the society. I, personally, take the view that the amount of the exercise is a key to improve overall health because of it impact on physical and mental health, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, doing more exercise, individuals would be able to increase their phisical health. TO be more specific, one the main shifts that have happend in human being's life style is log hours of jobs. In the past centries, before indestrialisation and major shifts in human being's life style, more physical activities were inclouded in profession.in fact, workers have a healthier body because of continuous movments during day. However, in today's jobs most of the people are sitting in back of the tables for long times and their body gradually weaken due to less activity during day. Moreover, raise in the amount of the exercise can impact individuals mental health.
Secondly, brain release some chemicals during performing sports and physical activities which assist sports men/women to have a happier life. As a result of regular physical activities our brain release chemicals like Endrophine which not only decrease the level of stress in body but also make sportsmen/women happier. In addition, playing sports help individuals to have a strength immune system which enables us to have more stamina in situations which are dangerous for us.
To wrap it up, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons bring us to the conclusion that physical activities play curcial role in human being overall health. For, physical activities directly influence body's abilities to resist in dangerous conditions and because sports decrease the pressure of the today's hectic life which is on us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11267605634 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79088834005 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5704225227 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126977987846 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517423627409 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374834333625 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786920384311 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431726374806 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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