Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between two people.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">As the saying goes, Honestly is the best policy. But telling the truth always is close to impossible n today's modern era. I disagree with the fact that telling truth is the most important consideration in any relation between two people. Sometimes telling a white lie is beneficial to people.I feel this way for two reasons which I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, telling white lies occasionally for the benefit of someone is a good thing to do and does not affect us adversely. For example one of my friend had met with an accident and the doctors had told me that he would not be able to walk again. But I told his mother that he will be fine if good care and treatment is given to him. I did not want to say the truth as I knew that she would be devastated when she hears this. She took extremely good care of him and in one year he had made significant improvement. If i would have told his mother the truth she would not have treated him so well. She would have collapsed causing danger to her life as well as her son's life.
Secondly, telling the truth openly spoils relations. People in today's generation only like to hear good things about them. They do not like to get any negative feedback. I had a personal experience with this. Once my colleague was going for a date and she asked me how was her dress. I was being candid and told that the dress did not suit her and since she was going on a date she could have dressed better, She took it way too personally. From then on she started creating problems in my professional life and stopped talking to me. That is the time I realized it is not good to tell the truth always and telling a white lies in some occasions is better to save relations.
In summary, I feel that telling a white lie in some occasions is better. This is because sometimes telling a truth may cause danger to one's life and spoil relations. It is better to take precautions than suffer from them.</span><br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, i feel, in summary, as well as, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44864864865 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.693286299 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505405405405 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1199050079 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217602974841 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720250501143 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131980762154 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161769927492 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156160490451 0.0645574589148 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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