An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
Every human life has 3 parts: past, present, and future. While some people believe that people need to prepare for the future because it will be important and precious, I strongly advocate that laying eyes on the present is a fundamental process that humans should do.
To begin with, there is no denying that if people do not preserve facilities at the moment, there will not appear any future. Global warming or limited resources in energy are specific examples of this statement. With global warming, many governments around the world agree to sign in the agreement in Paris 2017 to apply rules to reduce the global warming phenomenon. Due to its emergency, people need to solve this problem right away. Furthermore, humans notice that they are running out of energy resources such as coal or gasoline. Humans have not thought about the future, they are already preoccupied with things in the present.
Moreover, no one can predict what will be happening in the future. This means that preparing for a good present-day will be a better option for humans. There is an idiom that” Now alive, tomorrow die”, implicitly asserting that people just live cheerful lives because we cannot even know what will happen in the next few minutes. Besides that, if humans contribute positively to society currently, they are contributing to building a great future so that everyone should live in the way they prefer.
All things considered, knowing the future is important will be a good option. However, humans should care about their current life. If not, they will face many problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48622236594 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5808923079 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147502584857 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445308463012 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523633646919 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999712756633 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593219122232 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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