Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this day and age, many young adults enjoy traveling around the world to live and work which will bring them to gain many new experiences; however, many people believe that living in the same city for their whole life will have better benefits. I strongly advocate the second situation due to the significant advantages it supplies.
To begin with, in Viet Nam, there is an idiom: “ settle down and establish a career”. This means that humans cannot have a good career when starting at new places but the career will develop if people put all of their strength in the work for a long time. This idiom has been proved many thousands of years ago. For example, once my dad told me about his life story; He started his career as a worker, after many years, he tried to contribute positively to the companies and he showed that he had the capacity to grow the company. After ten years, he has his position right now. Through this example, it implies that he has to commit to the company for a long time in order to take the faith of the company's board of directors so that if people tend to change their jobs when they cannot have a good position, they cannot succeed due to the lack of patience.
People will have good friends when they commit to their city or business. Living in a city for many years, citizens can find many friends that suitable for them to work or hang out; compared with other options that if moving around, the new friend might not trust you and they might do something behind your back. For example, recently I watched “squid game” - one of the tv shows. People in that show just meet one so that at the beginning, they help each other to survive through the challenge from the game. Nevertheless, due to the survival game, they lie to each other to pass through the game. From this example, people can see that new friends in new places might not be as good as friends who people knew well for a long time.
All things considered, people can find many benefits things when living or working in the same places for a long time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, as to, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45238095238 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18329400633 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505291005291 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4633393076 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105187107661 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359028491648 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357180316024 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683233999639 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324877773803 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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