Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
agree:
the professors have more money as means that they have to put more effort into their teaching, preparing lessons and more enthusiasm into teaching
the professors will have more responsibility with the money they receive, by explain after class and the ….
In the education environment, learning and teaching are the most significant factors that the school needs to consider. Some people assert that increasing professors’ salaries will raise the education system. I strongly advocate this idea due to the many advantages it has.
Firstly, when having more money, the professors tend to put more effort into their lessons. The professors will prepare the lessons carefully and try to make them without boring aspects which will help students to have a lesson with adequate knowledge. In fact, having more money means that the professors will have more responsibility with the salaries they achieve. It thereby will boost the professors’ enthusiasm. For example, the professors have to participate actively during the class to avoid students who are always lazy and sleepy so that every student can gain knowledge. Besides that, extra lessons after school time can be provided to meet the goal of improving the education system because these extra lessons might be the condition for the professor to gain more money.
Another benefit that this method contributes to education is that the university can find qualified teachers. Normally, people think that teaching is a career that cannot compare the salaries to engineer or other jobs; however, the current salaries of teachers will create a competition that many people want to have so that the university can easily choose the best teacher among many good candidates. Moreover, when having these challenging jobs, the candidates will perform their best to deserve the jobs which will convey knowledge to students to improve and develop the current education system.
All things considered, spending more budget on the professor’s salaries will have a positive effect on how students obtain the lessons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the professors’ enthusiasm. For example, the professors have to participate activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3661971831 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68418890272 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0718572075 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263715432407 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103271352503 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729940829067 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151642374713 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690817661207 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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