To be a successful person, one must be open to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind
At the turn of the new century, one thing that would not be astonishing anymore is hearing about new ideas day by day. As a matter of fact, the modern society has gone through some changes by the enormous impact of new concepts. A simple recognition of this subject leads our discussion to the questions of how people can keep up with these new ideas. Although some people adhere to this belief that new concepts do not leave profound effects on their lives, in my vantage point, for making progress you need to be exposed new ideas every day since it can help you to be specialized in special skills, and also improve your personal lives.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to get informed about new ideas is acquiring particular ability. It goes without saying that with the development human society more and more people tend to get familiar with new ideas because in this way they can improve their skills and creativities, so finding a worthwhile job. Take a case of an employee that do not have tendency to learn new things or change his mind, for instance. There is no doubt that after a while not only cannot he keep on his job, but also he cannot make progress in his life. In contrast, if he change his mind and get familiar with new concepts, he will be a successful employee because these ideas provide opportunities for him to use his creativity in the best way. As a consequence, making headway and being specialized in a special job are significant advantages of opening mind for receiving new ideas and changing mind about old things.
The further subtle point is that improving personal life can be considered as another advantage of opening to new concepts. It is crystal-clear that nowadays technology is developing so fast that people could not keep up with them unless they keep increasing their knowledge about new things. Actually, according to recent researches done in my city, a prominent psychologist in the convection that people who open their minds for getting familiar with new concepts have better lives because they can attract successful people with talking about new inventions or ideas and make friendship with them. Hence, they can enhance their lives. In the modern eras, hardly, can anyone make contact with successful people if he does not change his mind. As a result, improving personal life is a remarkable merit of opening mind to new concepts.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad look over the main points and discussions reveals the fact that nowadays, it is highly beneficial for people to getting familiar with new things because it can help them to be specialized in their jobs, and also improve their personal lives. It is high time to stopped overlooking that people with old ideas can be successful. Can you see a person who do not change his mind become a prosperous person? Have you ever seen a successful person in his job without being creative and getting familiar with new things? I absolutely believe no.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...g that would not be astonishing anymore is hearing about new ideas day by day. As a matter...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ideas'' or 'idea's'?
Suggestion: ideas'; idea's
...stonishing anymore is hearing about new ideas day by day. As a matter of fact, the mo...
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Line 2, column 504, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'keeps'.
Suggestion: keeps
...t that after a while not only cannot he keep on his job, but also he cannot make pro...
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Line 2, column 586, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
...rogress in his life. In contrast, if he change his mind and get familiar with new conc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'no doubt', 'talking about', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213143872114 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.175843694494 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11190053286 0.0866891130778 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426287744227 0.046263068375 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0763765541741 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13676731794 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0586145648313 0.0351676179071 167% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59084642677 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284191829485 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00532859680284 0.00188951952338 282% => OK
Determiners: 0.0728241563055 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266429840142 0.0209618222197 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106571936057 0.0139019557991 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2998.0 2387.08602151 126% => OK
No of words: 520.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76538461538 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334615384615 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244230769231 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155769230769 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105769230769 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59084642677 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471153846154 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.0367527416 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7619047619 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3369152119 48.84282405 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.761904762 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7619047619 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.184981685 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.38554216867 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350841178821 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117975149842 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0666234615217 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462517117347 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138889283717 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132515387909 0.114077575197 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803313254544 0.0781384742642 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443879129045 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0435242552471 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269863110076 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502678225033 0.0618886996521 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.