Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your
At the turn of the new century, with the galloping rate of science and technology, no one can turn a blind eye to direct and indirect effects of teachers on a society thriving. A simple recognition of this argument lends our discussion to the question of how we can appreciate teachers. Although some people adhere to this belief that in the past teachers had more respect, in my vantage point, nowadays more and more people cognize of teachers’ roles in a nation since they are as a role model for students, and also they make the biggest contribution in a society.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to admire teachers is their role in nurturing children. Without a shadow of doubt, teachers play such an important role in a country that a person’s success it heavily based on. As a matter of fact, children spend most of their time in a school, so the teachers leave profound impact on them even more than their parents. Take a case of a student who does not like clean his room, for instance. When his teacher talks about this subject with him, he accepts his mistake and tries to do this task in the best way, because a teacher is as a hero for children that students like to follow their teacher even lavishly. As a consequence, it is a must for all people that admire teachers and respect them.
The further more subtle point is that what has made teachers very respectful is their roles in developing a country. It is noteworthy that a teacher makes the biggest contribution by education students who are supposed to attend the society in the near future. They allocate their time for teaching new things to children. Actually, in a school students are educated by experienced teachers and learn how to be successful person. Not only can they get familiar with science, but also they learn how to be a responsible person. For example, if students make mistake and do something wrong, they must accept their mistake and apologize. According to a recent research conducted in my country, psychologists are in the convention that teachers have a pivotal role in opening a new window in front of students. Hardly can anyone make headway in his life without a supportive teacher. As a result, teachers provide an opportunity for children to have a golden future.
On the whole, according to above-mentioned points and details, teachers have respect in a society because of his role in expanding knowledge and nurturing students. It is high time we stopped overlooking the fact that children can make headway jus by receiving helps from his parent. Have you ever seen a successful person without a good teacher? I absolutely believe no.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259259259259 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.140350877193 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0662768031189 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.046263068375 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0662768031189 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142300194932 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0331384015595 0.0351676179071 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73525853103 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272904483431 0.0309702414327 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00194931773879 0.00188951952338 103% => OK
Determiners: 0.109161793372 0.0887237588012 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0136452241715 0.0209618222197 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194931773879 0.0139019557991 140% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2681.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 464.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77801724138 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355603448276 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286637931034 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191810344828 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0991379310345 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73525853103 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 57.4022052577 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0909090909 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2484343216 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.863636364 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 49.7547021944 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.784 1.45489161554 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275343512647 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0881649679565 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693457343094 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.42521314162 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14437940646 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932928105299 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673018299211 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399273454264 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0431060730629 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205372659898 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460224301949 0.0618886996521 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.