because modern life is complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Some decades ago, life was much easier, and all that people had to do was just some simple tasks. Nowadays, life has became far more complicated, and people with a messy schedule cannot do well in their lives and jobs. Having the ability of setting plans enable people to do better in their lives and do not lose their visions to their goals. In my view, one of the key abilities all people should have in this world is the ability of organizing, and I will elaborate on my opinion with the following reasons.
First and foremost, planning can help people to do more in less time which is essential for a successful life in a complicated world. The expenses of life is really more now compared to the past, and everything has become specialized which can make life even more complicated. By using a plan, people can visualize their goals and tasks which can help them to do them faster. My own life experience is a compelling example of this point. When I was in school, I was a messy girl and never had a plan for studying. As a result, I never knew how much time I have for each exam and used to waste my time surfing in the internet. Consequently, I had to study all my subjects in last night before the exam which could result in lots of problems for me. When I entered the university, I decided to follow some rules and plans. I dedicated almost one week to planning my whole semester, and it really helped me to do much better in my studying. I knew I have not lots of time which waste them by playing, and it could help me to study faster. This life experience led me to believe that how much having a good plan can help people to do faster.
Second, having a good plan can help people to organize their minds as well as their days and assure the quality of their works. People just by having a glance at their plan can depict all their tasks and goals in their minds which results in doing them better. When people know what they exactly want to do, they can go through them and do them in the best way. As an example. I can mention my father. He is a retired detective, and as a result of his job, he always has a great plan. At the end of each month, he spend some hours to set new plans for his ongoing month and keeps his mind organized in this way. Each time we ask him about his plans, he is aware of all of them, and it is just due to his well categorized mind. Thanks to this habit, he was always a good detective, and this man is one of the reasons why I believe in the necessity of planning.
To sum up, living in a messy and complicated world which we are living now is not easy, and the only thing which may make it easier is having the ability of planning. By following a plan, people can boost their activities and increase both the quality and quantity of their works. Based on these presented justification, my conviction is that for having a good life in this complex world, all the people have to know how to organize their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...t some simple tasks. Nowadays, life has became far more complicated, and people with a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...complicated world. The expenses of life is really more now compared to the past, a...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rough them and do them in the best way. As an example. I can mention my father. He...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, really, second, so, well, as a result, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 566.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24734982332 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30103445867 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406360424028 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3962342977 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.037037037 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.962962963 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238474298498 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734125558856 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596250418179 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172126504188 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449003655886 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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