Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Modern life runs very swiftly in which many of us hardly get time to breath. I remember the phrase, “time and tide waits for none” now, as this is the mantra, I had been taught ever since my childhood. A systematic planning and organisation is very important to execute a successful and perfect work. Undoubtedly, planning is an inevitable aspect to carry on a task with ease. I strongly support and believe this about which I will explain in my following essay.
First and foremost, planning well the daily lessons and organising the necessary assignments handy considerably reduces the time and energy. if a student fails to organise things and keep his room clumsy, he may have to waste considerable amount of time in searching the books and assignments. so, it is very crucial to save time by organising the things and assignments so that the student can swiftly surf or select his assignments. A library is a perfect example of how well planning and organising enable its users to easily search and select the books.
Moreover, a proper time planner or time table to prepare the assignments reduces the stress whenever a student needs to prepare for the examinations. For example, when I was in high school, I framed a time table to prepare my monthly lessons due to which I had a rough outline of what I had to do daily without wasting time. this helped me to balance perfectly my studies, recreation time and sports practice. Ultimately, I secured higher grades and topped the high school exams in our state with flying colours. I attribute the success not only to my hard work but also by the smart work of planning and organizing things.
Besides that, planning the future is very important for young people to toil everyday towards the goal. my teacher always says, “if u fail to plan, you plan to fail”, that means without a plan, we will fail in all our endeavours. Nowadays students prepare for their university entrance exams from their middle school itself. With the growing competition, it is vital to run with the flow of their fellow peers. so if the student has not been enrolled in such programs from the beginning itself, it may be difficult for them later to catch up in middle of the syllabus. proper planning and execution are the keys to success which should be emphasized time and again to the younger generation.
In contrary, I see few of the younger generation have carefree attitude and live reckless without paying attention to their elders. this not only ruin their discipline and lower their grades but also make them live clueless later.
To summarise from the above mentioned facts, I reckon that planning and organising are the two eyes of success. without a plan, young people may tend to sway in the wrong path and so it is absolutely essential to frame a plan and execute things to lead a successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81451612903 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64912910512 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524193548387 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2237771608 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.20833333333 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19374275962 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543413395801 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624491148395 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101157143617 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633013860965 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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