Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
With rocketing development of modern society, advances in technology have made it possible for people to have a more convenient and colorful life than the past. People can have easy access to all the informations, commodities, and resources as they want. Thus some individuals suppose that people are happier than before, while others hold the oppsite idea. From my perspective, I am in favor of the latter one.
Admittedly, living in modern society means people can enjoy more convenience brought by technology. They can overview the Internet, listening to music, wathing videos, or learning skills. They can also commute to work much faster than before via the subway system. And they possess all the fruitful food that may not be obtained decades ago. Thus, some people seem to live under the illusion that they equate convenience with happiness. However, they fail to take into account the fact that along with the convenience, more stress appears in our lives, which exerts passive effects on our emotions.
For one thing, increasing work stress have, to some extent, disturbed our normal lives with our families. Nowadays, it is common to see that mothers take their children to go to school, to play. The father, who has to support daily expense, endeavor themselves to work harder and harder, and spend tons of time in their works, in order to provide a pleasant life condition to his kid and wife. The fathers are s under great pressure because they cannot afford being fired. Thus, they merely have the access to enjoy the happy time with their families.
Furthermore, people are experience more estrangement recently. People in increasing number have felt that they have few friend that are true friends. The interpersonal relations just collapse over time as the consequence of the development of technology. An illustrating example is that what happend on the way to work. Standing on the subway, it is familier that everyone around just look at their cell phone, can low their heads. At times, some old man or lady need a seat, people besides can just ignore this or they merely can see it.
Based on the discussion above, in spite of the convenience from the development of modern society, the pressure along with it just make people less happier than they should be. And the disadvantages far outweigh its positive sides and will play a significant role on our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ommodities, and resources as they want. Thus some individuals suppose that people ar...
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Line 5, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n to his kid and wife. The fathers are s under great pressure because they cannot...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...eat pressure because they cannot afford being fired. Thus, they merely have the acces...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun friend seems to be countable; consider using: 'few friends'.
Suggestion: few friends
...reasing number have felt that they have few friend that are true friends. The interpersona...
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Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less happy'?
Suggestion: less happy
...pressure along with it just make people less happier than they should be. And the disadvanta...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for one thing', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222466960352 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.15859030837 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0770925110132 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0506607929515 0.046263068375 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.068281938326 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125550660793 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0330396475771 0.0351676179071 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58698666406 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0374449339207 0.0309702414327 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00220264317181 0.00188951952338 117% => OK
Determiners: 0.0748898678414 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0242290748899 0.0209618222197 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011013215859 0.0139019557991 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2392.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 400.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1625 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1025 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58698666406 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5775 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 68.3337185441 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3913043478 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3424169056 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 41.3913043478 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.37301587302 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314736611233 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0843204972404 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0696658176816 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467899932996 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136466198854 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109842803672 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525233214906 0.0781384742642 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30865292317 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0490302226332 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210963833155 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409748473537 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.