Best place to visit tourist place or quiet place
There is no doubt with the improved modes of transportation traveling is now common in nowadys than even before. In today's era people love to travel foreign countries with the easy access of transportation. Although while traveling some people may prefer to visit the quiet places so they can enlighten themselves with other cultures. In my perspective, it is better to go to the tourists places rather than quiet places. I feel this for several reasons, Which I would like to mention in the subsequent passages.
The first compelling reason corroborating my point of view is associated with the idea that visiting famous places assist us to know the history of any country. To be more specific, a lot of tourists places have some backgrounds, which usually have deep connections with the history of the country. For instance, last year, I had a chance to visit the Lahore which is one of the largest city in the Pakistan with alot of historical tombs and buildings. Eventhough, I had an option to visit the Islmabad the capital of Pakistan, Which is kind of quiet city with less population and no special tourist attraction. As my motive was to get the idea of history of Pakistan, I choose to go to Lahore, where I visited the great tomb of pakistan" Minare-Pakistan. Upon, my arrival to that place I came to know about the history of Pakistan. Minare-Pakistan building have a special drawings on it in which the history of the paksitan is written. If I had not decided to go to visit the Minare-Pakistan, I would not have known about the histotry of Pakistan.
On top of that, going to tourists attraction places provides us an opportuity to learn more about the cutlure. To explain broadly, when we visit famous tourist places we can get an opportunity to talk to different people, which can give us more knowledge about the culture.
My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I visited lahore Pakistan. I went to the great badshai mosque, where I met people from different communities. As that mosque is the main tourist attraction for the Muslim in pakistan, I come to know about the special dress Muslims wear for pray. Most of the people attending the prayer was wearing special costumes called shalwar-kameez, which was quite amazing for me. Therefrore, this example demonstrates that visiting tourist attraction can benfit us to learn any culture.
In conclusion, from the above-mentioned discussion, I can say while traveling to any foreign that it is beneficial to visit tourist places rather than queit places. Because not only we can learn about the culture of any country, but we can also enlighten ourselves with the history of any country by visiting any tourist place.
Raw Score
4.5
/5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 860, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'drawing'?
Suggestion: drawing
... MinarePakistan building have a special drawings on it in which the history of the paksi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79569892473 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75267137092 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434408602151 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 465.0 20.1344086022 2309% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2230.0 100.406767564 2221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 465.0 20.6045352989 2257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 115.0 5.45110844103 2110% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334039195924 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.334039195924 0.076458572812 437% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216257702909 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835221135009 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 233.7 11.7677419355 1986% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -392.04 58.1214874552 -675% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 183.5 10.1575268817 1807% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.04 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.65 8.01818996416 370% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.002688172 550% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 188.0 10.0537634409 1870% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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