The best use of that time is to play games and sports with children or do somehting related to schoolwork together
Making good use of that precious limited time which leads to a good quality of companion could be significant to kids and parent-child relationship. Even though some would think it is better to utilize that time to play games or sports together, I prefer doing some study-related activities and make it an interesting journey and experience.
Schoolwork-related activities could help children cultivate good studying habits. I believe that home is also an important place to develop their intelligence and parents should guide them. Take my teacher for example, she had a 10 years old boy whose academic in school is always on the top of the class. He started to reading and discussing together with his mother after dinner and every weekend for a fixed amount of time since he was little. In the process the boy gets into the habit of reading and studying. When children have good habits, it would much easier for them to have better performance, more confidence, and less difficulties in school
Studying activities could arouse children's enthusiasm toward knowledge. We may only need 30 minutes exercise a day to build up strong healthy body and have fun meantime, but the enthusiasm of studying and accumulating knowledge systems would be time-consuming and a long term project. For example, I have a cousin who likes sports and games so much and put a lot of time in these entertainments and avoid doing homework or deal with those problems he had on any subject. It is a very tough situation for parents to deal with during his rebellious teenager period. That's also partly because parents didn't really guide and pay enough attention on their schooling when he was younger.
Even though, recreation is important to relax and develop some hobbies and exposed children more to different things. But more importantly, parents should take even more serious responsibility to develop their minds and develop this crucial hobby of loving studying and knowledge.
In conclusion, no matter how much limited time we have with children, cultivating children's good studying habits and passion for knowledge should be taken serious consideration. I truly believe children would profoundly benefit from it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion: That's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16155988858 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89418124868 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573816155989 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4548356075 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8125 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219462377459 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640463094383 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637177228956 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116849768411 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566822334925 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.